Beach bar

[roland]

hi guys,

 

here is my new work a beach bar ........

C&C are welcome.

 

 

thank you,

[3dp]

having just come back from dubai on holiday

(hot but recommened)

this brings back a few memories

however for c+c you need to intensify the lighting and scale the size of grass by maybe 50%

also how about a few thirst customers and the usual clutter found on a bar top

[Msamir]

The light on the palm tree on the left is wrong the shadows should be in the opposite direction also try and add some sand and water in the background and see what it'll look like.

[gfa2]

I agree with Mazen, but that's what you get when you use RPC's. I'm really disliking RPC's more and more. It seems that with the GI and all the lighting stuff that everyone is doing, the RPC's just don't look that great anymore.

[Tim Saunders]

good comments. the floating little island would work if you were going for a sort of conceptual proposal, but what you have so far looks realistic enough you need to complete it by adding the things the others mentioned. it really needs some sort of beach background.

[Dave_UK]

Cool, try use a different ground texture with a bump map the current doesn't look too good.

[oyie]

also..you forgot to add shadows for your palm trees