Huge House

[danteprojetos]

Done this in a bit of rush (took the job monday morning, had to deliver yesterday 6:00 pm), and because of this I look foward to any C&Cs that can improve it for the portfolio or any possible modifications in the future .

Also, I have a question: in this image, the speedtree palm trees looked awful because they where reflecting the environment map.. I replaced the environment for black and this was the results... How can i fix it ?

 

 

 

Modeled in AutoCAD, Rendered with 3dsmax 7 + vray

Thanks in advance!!

[Trickster1914]

This model has the potential to look really good. My C&C would be…

 

1. You have some antialiasing issues.

 

2. On the fourth image your daylight appears too harsh on the ground giving severe burn out.

 

3. On the third image you seem to have overlap between your grass and your paving.

 

4. Your grass looks to fake, maybe something can be done about it in PS.

 

5. On your fourth image the girl sunbathing appears to be sitting in the shade, yet the brightness of her would suggest otherwise.

 

6. Lastly, and this is a design issue so you might not have a say in this but what is that crazy structure running between the two buildings? I guess it is some kind of car shelter? It looks very alien to the surrounding architecture.

 

Of course this is only my opinion. And I understand this was a rush job. Lastly, I think your water in the pool looks fantastic on the last image.

[danteprojetos]

Hello phillip! Thanks for your reply, you saw things i coudn't, When i fix it It'll be a lot better.

About the alien structure, it's polycarbonate, and there is a metal structure to support, I didn't did it because of the time given, but I'll try to model it. It's purpose is to cover the stairs in the exterior. and the AA, I think it's compression problem.

Is there a way to convert to jpg without getting this AA issue? I aways have this problem.

Cheers

 

Any more c&c?