martincg Posted September 12, 2005 Share Posted September 12, 2005 hallo to all, this is my last work, it is still wip and your critique will be very helpful, thank you martin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skala67 Posted September 13, 2005 Share Posted September 13, 2005 At first glance everything looks well done. The only thing that is bothering me is the chairs. They are too perfect. Lined up in perfect rows, exactly same distance apart. this tends to be a point that goes back and forth all the time. Whether or not human interaction should be apparent in presentation images. Maybe someone else can chime in on it with their opinion. Oh some other small points after looking again. there is a little too much overall noise, and some reflection on the floor always helps. Really like the lighting. looking good, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anvaraziz Posted September 13, 2005 Share Posted September 13, 2005 nice job,.... image looks little noisy..... wht all softs u used?... keep going,. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martincg Posted September 13, 2005 Author Share Posted September 13, 2005 anvaraziz: v-ray and PS skala67: i think with the chairs you are right, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skogskalle Posted September 13, 2005 Share Posted September 13, 2005 agree about the chairs.... and it looks like youve used the Unsharpen mask way too much in PS... apart from that I really like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisHolland Posted September 13, 2005 Share Posted September 13, 2005 Yes, your image is over-sharpened. A good and practically always working method to sharpen your render is to apply 1 sharpen filter + another one but then faded down to 25% (edit>fade sharpen...) that's all. If this render is this well lighted by it's own, you could just bring down all at once with the level adjuster for a softer atmosphere, a softer feel in your presentation. I don't think the chair setup is disturbing. If they were bolted ones, they would be as straight as they are now. I like the pattern.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martincg Posted September 14, 2005 Author Share Posted September 14, 2005 thanks for your tips Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmedraft Posted July 9, 2006 Share Posted July 9, 2006 At first glance everything looks well done. The only thing that is bothering me is the chairs. They are too perfect. Lined up in perfect rows, exactly same distance apart. this tends to be a point that goes back and forth all the time. Whether or not human interaction should be apparent in presentation images. Maybe someone else can chime in on it with their opinion. Oh some other small points after looking again. there is a little too much overall noise, and some reflection on the floor always helps. Really like the lighting. looking good, When I am the first one into a meeting room like this the chairs are perfectly aligned. The janitorial service sets them up this way. So...it is possible if we lable this one "Before the meeting". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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