Town House In Progress

[NOOXY]

hey guys here's another project i'm working on..townhouse...this is what i've come up with so far...how's my progress c&c most welcomed?

[Msamir]

The building itself is nice and the texturing is nice too but i think it needs more action some people or cars, also the lighting of the background image doesnt match the light rendered.

[kulbir bal]

shadows seems too dark... try to reduce it

[ipdesigner]

*i agree, great modelling ang lighting on your structure but im not comfortable with the background

[Harjeet Singh]

the finals should be great!

foreground and lights please

[NOOXY]

thanks guys...but i seem to be having trouble getting some good car models and people to stick in there..tries using rpc but they stand out too much don't look natural in the scene...plants are no problem got plenty of those...any tips..

 

also any suggestions on how to match my scene with the background scene..i just can't seem to get htem to match i probably might just change it

[STRAT]

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also any suggestions on how to match my scene with the background scene..i just can't seem to get htem to match i probably might just change it

 

as it stands the photo looks almost to have a white mist layer over it. it's very flattly lit and uncontrasty. like poor cgi. i'd take the backround into photoshop. there i'd play with the contrast, desaturate it a tad, and maybe add a spot of blur.

 

also, your model lighting is too contrasty (which is ironic, as most people's render's these days aren't contrasty enough). try upping the value of the main gi emitter maybe. you might also want to turn the main direct light down a bit. (and also lowering the light's shadow percentage).

[NOOXY]

ok i've added foilage, cars and some people in here to make it look lively...

 

i've lightened the shadows and adjusted the lighting a bit,,,

 

c&c away everyone...

[ipdesigner]

*o..this one looks better now , but still there are some points you have to work on. 1. the background still not looking good, the camera angle doesnt fit to this. btw, what is the height of the camera? try to make it eye level and so with the target. 2. the people and the cars are out of scale, compare the proportion of both. i think those cars are small. 3. the plants on the forground are distracting, try to remove those on the left side.

*keep posting pal...

[NOOXY]

thanks "ipdesigner" for the background images......funny i had one of them on my system already .....and thanks all for the c&c

 

anyway i hope this background works and i adjusted my camera angle accordingly...what do uall guys think of the new image?

[Tim Saunders]

better, i still think you need an eye level camera angle. where we are looking from now makes the building looks small, and it's a pretty good sized building. personally i likes your first background. i would have liked to see you make the adjustments to make the render/golf coarse image match.