A home i just like

[darkblue_wire]

Hi i have modeled & rendring this house from a picture As training I will bew very happy to know critics

3ds max 7 + vray adv + photoshop

 

best regards to all members

[karl zacharias]

can you post the picture as well...I believe you may have some major tiling issues...ie. the brick, roof, and the grass

[Aaron2004]

did you apply any UVW mapping anywhere? The brick on your house looks inconsistent in some places. A good way to fix this would be with a cube UVW map, and then scale it along the x,y, and z axis as needed. Those bricks also look pretty large....are they the size that you want? What is your lighting situation? It seems awfully bright, but it could just be your choice of colors. When using Vray, I always use just one Directional light...then maybe some dim omni lights in darker cornerers of the scene.

[jasonio]

Good start! But you have a long way to go before you can call it finished!

 

The brick textures are too contrasted (and/or too small (not enough bricks)), whichever way the tiling is very obvious. Try adding bump mapping/displacement to the tiles and bricks. And check that the scale of the textures are consistent throughout. (They seem to be getting larger and smaller.)

 

Look on the internet for brick sizes/textures and scale the texture, By counting how many bricks you have in the texture you can work out how high (in units) your texture should be.

 

Scale down the timber texture. (At the moment it looks like a videogame.)

 

Window frames almost NEVER stick out from the face of the building - especially timber ones. Try a bit of booleaning and make some holes for the windows. Add some timber cills which over hang slightly.

 

Keep the eaves of the roof consistently overhanging throughout.

 

Do this and it will be vastly improved!

 

Keep at it. Good luck.

[darkblue_wire]

Thanks all

thanks for all of critics which is very helpfull i will try to rerender it after applying all changes

well, i have add uvw modifier but due to being beginner i could hardly adjust it

the windows made by renderable spline & i am sure it will be better to subtract it from the house body

another problem

render time take nearly 5 hours ......?

my pc configs

p4 2.4 - 512 mb ram - vga 64 ddr ati radeon 7000

could anybody tell me where is the problem

user or pc configs

my last request Can you tell me a website thathelp me learning architecture modling techniqus ? & how to work faster ?