ecastillor Posted September 26, 2005 Share Posted September 26, 2005 Trying out a day and night version for a remodelling job...this place is going from a Kiddies Party place to a night club.... Please comment on how to improve this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ecastillor Posted September 26, 2005 Author Share Posted September 26, 2005 By the way, There are still a lot of details to add, like shadows and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Cassil Posted September 26, 2005 Share Posted September 26, 2005 Looks pretty good but there are a couple improvements I think you could make. First, the camera needs to be level or use the camera correction mod (if using max/viz). Also, you might want to give yourself a little more room on the sides and top, and a little less room on the bottom. In the night shot, I'm not sure why the white panels are so white. Maybe they are light fixtures but in they day shot they don't look like it. Last thing, the background images are a little grainy, which could be ok if you add some grain to your renders. I love the water spilling on the right in both images, and the light shooting up from the ground in the night shot. I look forward to an update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrothca Posted September 28, 2005 Share Posted September 28, 2005 something I noticed right away....The blue in the night shot appears way to saturated for me...I think if you desaturate that just a bit the render will look much nicer....same with those white panels...the night shot has great potential.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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