alikashan Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 hi there its my first time on the forum thoug i am a regular visitor of the site i am posting my work for c&c of course i am not as good as you people are but a little observations may help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ecastillor Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 looks fine...but...whats with the dooms day sky? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 a few things... -the sky- dont use an image as your background like that. it's really obvious in the reflections of the glass, it isn't reflecting correctly. make a half dome larger than the site, then apply a sky map to it. reflections will be more like real world environment. -work on your textures, specifically the side walk (bad tile) and the pavement (lack of detail) other than that, it's getting there... chuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taprice Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 The building is leaning in on itself quite a bit also, maybe use the Camera Correction modifier to straighten it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alikashan Posted October 8, 2005 Author Share Posted October 8, 2005 thnkio all of you guys its hard to tell how glad i am for your reviews and comments. salam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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