kippu Posted October 12, 2005 Share Posted October 12, 2005 this is a image i am working on .... just looking for more pointers on this one thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesTaylor Posted October 12, 2005 Share Posted October 12, 2005 nice image. the thing that jumps out at me are the 2 pillars nearest the camera. are they central? i'm guessing they are close but the camera angle makes it look as if they are shunted to one side. also the gap between them, looks as if someone could squeeze thro there which wouldn't be allowed maybe add some more railings or something similar. James Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted October 12, 2005 Share Posted October 12, 2005 james is right those pillars do seam shifted over a bit. also the palm trees seam to be better resolution than the render. give them some gaussian blur to add (fake) some dof. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted October 12, 2005 Author Share Posted October 12, 2005 ya guess those columns need work ... nice tip on the palm trees .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbr Posted October 13, 2005 Share Posted October 13, 2005 Looks really nice to me. Them pillars are a little distracting. I think the palms look fine, but I'd like to see what it looks like with a little blur. You could also try duplicating the layer, bluring it, then putting the blurred trees beneath the not blurred ones. It'll help soft the edges. The bg and trees help draw your eye out to the view, which if this if for a client they should love - they're selling the view. It's a very nice image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted October 13, 2005 Share Posted October 13, 2005 *i agree with the pillars, but really a great lighting..looks perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted October 18, 2005 Author Share Posted October 18, 2005 small update rendered with low settings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 fun for a portfolio, but not for a client. looks good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted October 18, 2005 Author Share Posted October 18, 2005 yea i am playing now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inxa Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 Hi, Nice light and composition. Is there a story behind it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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