Guest nazcaLine Posted October 12, 2005 Share Posted October 12, 2005 this a job i'm about to finish. critiques are welcome so i can improve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted October 12, 2005 Share Posted October 12, 2005 how bout some reflection on the wood, floortile, glass n stuff. is that just an environment map issue behind the doors in the third image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notamondayfan Posted October 13, 2005 Share Posted October 13, 2005 that background in the 3rd images grabs ur attention 4 the wrong reason. noticed the grain on all the tables is pointing in the same direction, so maybe rotated a few tables 90 degrees. also ur little round spot lights dont appear to b giving off any light. its gettin there tho m8! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJLynn Posted October 13, 2005 Share Posted October 13, 2005 I think you'd benefit from higher res maps and more samples. Try to break up the repetition of the wood patterns, and also, in the 3rd image, the wood framing in the back - the grain on the verticals needs to rotate 90 degrees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest nazcaLine Posted October 13, 2005 Share Posted October 13, 2005 thank you guys for your critiques, they're appreciated...right now im trying to solve those problems. but i gave up in the background image, so i deleted it and just using black, the glass in the curtain wall is more reflective to give it more life. design has changed, some things have been added... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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