jetty hotel

[roland]

hi guys,

 

im working now with a jetty hotel C&C are welcome......

 

 

thank you,

[ipdesigner]

*modelling is good, i like the water on the pond but there are some points you have to change

--background

--the shrubs looks repeating

--also on the grass, try to use vray displacement..but if you use scanline render, bumps will do

*what type of light did you used for this? try direct light with vray shadow, just a tip

[pradipta]

modeling and camera setting looks good. but as ipdesigner said you need to work more on texturing and composition. the plants looks flat in some places.

[Allen]

Echo what the others said.

 

The swimming pool...I would change the bump and smooth that water, but in the hot-tub, I'd agitate it slightly more and perhaps make it less transparent around the edges.

 

Your model looks great.

[roland]

*modelling is good, i like the water on the pond but there are some points you have to change

--background

--the shrubs looks repeating

--also on the grass, try to use vray displacement..but if you use scanline render, bumps will do

*what type of light did you used for this? try direct light with vray shadow, just a tip

i used vray im still new so tips will be appreciated, i used direct light with vray shaow

 

 

thank you,

[roland]

praipta and allen ,

 

thank you for your comments i will do your suggestions

[dexter]

Roland, how u doin man? Very nice model...and I like the water...I agree with ipdesigner about the repeatitions of your shrubs, I suggest u avoid such things, make them random in arrangement...

[roland]

Roland, how u doin man? Very nice model...and I like the water...I agree with ipdesigner about the repeatitions of your shrubs, I suggest u avoid such things, make them random in arrangement...

 

hi,

its been a while im good and you......