Cafe

[NOOXY]

hey guys this is my latest project. it'a cafe located inside a store of a client..how's my progress so far..c&c away

 

cheers

[Tim Saunders]

looks realy good. i like your squggly reflection under the bar. it might be a bit too strong, but it's nice. the map on the oven or whatever tthat is behind the bar seams a bit out of place with how well everything else is done. looking good over all.

[Munz]

First reaction is your camara is low, looks like the view of a small child.

 

munz

[NOOXY]

hey guys thanks for the c&c heres pre post image..

[skala67]

You have such nice reflective floors...

Lets see the peoples reflection in them..

its lookin good..

[NOOXY]

i added the reflections and a bartender.

 

is this better

 

cheers;)

[STRAT]

you reflected those peeps in ps. they're all wrong. all squashed up. also, a common mistake made - the people are completely the wrong contrast and wrongly lit for the image.

 

the scene has great potential, but the general internal lighting doesnt work yet.

 

i'd suggest to up the gi accuracy a bit and add a shed load more stoch samples. there's hardly any gi going on in there to weight things down.