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Hi friends,

 

Here is my 1st contribution at cgarchitect.

 

Its a WIP of a residential bldg. I am aware that It doesnot match the photoreal standards set by so many senior members over here. I shall strive to reach these ideals.

 

I shall be needing your feedback & comments in how it can be improved? where it lacks ? what it lacks?

 

Your feedback is appreciated & most welcome.

 

Thanks

the 3dsMax Blogger

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hey shri ...

well i would work on the following things

a) camera angle .... the one u have is so straight and too far away to create an interest

b) different illumination levels of the entourage with the building

c)the glass ... need to work that material bro

d) a better background ... this one hurts my eye

 

good start :)

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... c)the glass ... need to work that material bro

d) a better background ... this one hurts my eye

good start :)

 

Thanks kippu !!

I must agree with you on the glass and Bg. There certainly seems some scope for improvement.

 

hey shri ...

b) different illumination levels of the entourage with the building

I would appreciate though, if you could elaborate on the " b) different illumination levels of the entourage with the building ". I dont think, I understood, what you have tried to point out here.

 

hey shri ...

a) camera angle .... the one u have is so straight and too far away to create an interest

As far as the camera angle goes; originally its a 3-point perspective from a close to human eye level, looking mid way towards the building. But I have corrected the camera, using the Camera Correction modifier,to make a 2-point perspective out of it, which is generally what we try to achieve in a Arch Viz, (though not necessarily always).

 

Keep the feedback coming !!!

 

Thanks

the 3dsMax Blogger

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good work....

the shining of the facade is unreal ... i guess u added that effect with photoshop, why not more reflections on material ?

anyway what are the cars ?

 

The shine is supposed to simulate the reflected glare of the sun in the windows .. do you guys think that such a scenario is possible .. where we depict the position of the sun in sky ususaly behind the camera by way of a reflection in the windows.. and yes its added in pshop.

 

some cars are lowpolygon 3d cars !! some are cut& paste photoshop work.

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