NOOXY Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 hey guys just another wip... c&c most welcome on my progress so far.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iain Denby Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 You're going to be under water VERY soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 26, 2005 Author Share Posted October 26, 2005 lol:D ...well it's actually a babecue area on a pier for motel near the sea..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtb0506 Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 i think what dibbers means is that the deck tooks like its angled down towards the water. the perspective of the render and the background do not completely match up, try tilting the camera angle down a little bit. good looking rendering otherwise, nice lighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 26, 2005 Author Share Posted October 26, 2005 is this a better angle guys.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bully712 Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 I think the angle is much better. Your edges are a little rough. You need to anti-alias them. Also the bump on your (decking looks fine) wood is a little strong. Other than that, I like the image. Wish I was there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted October 26, 2005 Share Posted October 26, 2005 *yeah, i agree the second image is better..but how about the roof of the swing, what material did you used? and the lighting of the background is different from that of the scene, its kinda brighter:confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 26, 2005 Author Share Posted October 26, 2005 thanks all for uall c&c ..well since it's a W.I.P i haven't added aa and all that nifty stuff to it.but ima keep uall posted on my progress.. cheers:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demo38 Posted October 27, 2005 Share Posted October 27, 2005 Maybe reducing the saturation in the sky / water will soften it up a bit. Looks like the swings are floating a bit, may want to play with your shadow bias. Also, maybe try bringing some of the elements into the foreground a bit for interrest, even if it's a sand bucket / shovel off to the side somewhere with some color in it... Right now, the view is straight out, but the objects are all pushed out towards the railing. Looks like a great place to be though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 27, 2005 Author Share Posted October 27, 2005 here's my update pic guys... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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