Foyer and Library

[mbowers]

Hello,

This is my first time posting work. Modelled in Max 7, and rendered using V-ray demo. Please be brutally critical. This will only help me understand using max and v-ray better. Thanks!

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[Jeff Mottle]

Hi Matthew,

 

Here are my comment:

 

Top image

 

Where are your lights located? They do not seem to relate to the luminaires in the scene. The lighting seems very blown out right now and disconnected from the scene. Migth also want to try a different exposure control

 

Something weird is going on around the glass (?) doors at bellow the counter. It looks like frosted glass but is too reflected. It also looks like a normals issue around the frosted glass or something reflected behind. Something is off.

 

Tone down the saturation and brightness of the picture.

 

Your drapes feel very rigid. maybe try to smooth that out a bit.

 

Bottom Image

 

The horizon line of the exterior image is off. It needs to be rotate clockwise. The same comments from above apply to the drapes and the lighting.

 

Try put some more random bends to the flowers in the pot. They are too symmetrical now and does not reflect reality.

[anvaraziz]

yup... jeff told well...