ecastillor Posted November 8, 2005 Share Posted November 8, 2005 This is a rendering of 2 trains stantions...design not mine! Can U help me improve this please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lambros Posted November 8, 2005 Share Posted November 8, 2005 eehh, what exactly would you like to improve? Looks great to me, I would not touch it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skala67 Posted November 8, 2005 Share Posted November 8, 2005 As far as improving, they probably work as they are. maybe tone down the red and blue in the second picture, but other than that they look good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anvaraziz Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 wow, nice work friend,,, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 eehh, what exactly would you like to improve? Looks great to me, I would not touch it! *i agree, these are perfect pal!! *good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 very nice, but a tad too clean for my liking. a texture on the concrete would make it look more like concrete. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesTaylor Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 i think i'd desaturate the blue in the 2nd image and to a lesser extent the red aswell. on the final image i think the underside of the elevated stucture is too bright and would be in more shadow than shown. have a look at dark the underside of the trees and bushes are to the right and across the road. finally i'd just add a touch of noise to the cg elements, mostly in the final image. not too much tho as the photos look quite crisp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sketchrender Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 Chris Nicholas (the dvd Gnome workshop guy) would be proud of that render the lighting is very good and the montage is good too. The blue in the 2nd image I persoanlly don't like, a more nutreal coloyur would probably look better or a metal. very good well done. phil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 I would suggest color correcting your source photos before establishing your lighting and final shot. The exposure settings look especially off on the last closeup image. I think the middle one with the arch design is the most successful and agree with the others about the saturation values in the first image. Perhaps adding a bit of grain in the last one would help with the composite. Right now it looks too clean compared to the real materials around it. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 minor point in the second image - the photo's shadows look allot stronger than your renderings shadows. also, i think that red truck would be in strong shadow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted November 9, 2005 Share Posted November 9, 2005 nice photoshoping ed. i'm sure the client will be very happy. yeah maybe a little stronger shadows, and a bit of variation mixed in for the structure. it does look a bit clean. i love the images though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P Zero Posted November 10, 2005 Share Posted November 10, 2005 I thik they look very good. The only thing I might change would be to add some dirt to the concrete. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffalo Bills Posted November 10, 2005 Share Posted November 10, 2005 Very nice work!! Photomontage very nice, modeling great. I agree with the comments on the shadows in the second one. The underside of the station should be a tad darker as well as the shadows it is casting. I would also add some texture to the concrete elements as they look to smooth. I also see a little bit of the old pedestrian bridge, just above and below the new pedestrian bridge leading to the new train station. 1st image looks great! Keep up the great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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