darkblue_wire Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 Hi all members well i have sent a message before to ask help for presentation . ok , i did it finaly & i have presented this project in my collage please evaluate it for me for every thing presentaion colours rendering materials Any critiques are very welcome best regards Mohamed Ahmed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue_wire Posted November 11, 2005 Author Share Posted November 11, 2005 hi i am sorry i dont know why the main project file (first & third attatchments not working ) even after i have changed it into low resolution anyway please tell me an uploading website that could accept file which is 450 kb in size thanx best regards for all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abilio_KID Posted November 11, 2005 Share Posted November 11, 2005 What program did you use for this? It would be nicer with some textures and maybe a few people (not many). Also you need to elevate that car a bit because the wheels are inside the road (why is the road that color?). Oh, try » ImageShack « to put your images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Palmer Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 Well first off I see that your scale is off with the car. From the car the front of the glass would be 5-6 feet tall. There is no way to get into the building, and the sidewalk/parking lot would never be poured to have raised spots like that. It’s a waste of money and I'm sure the SUV's wouldn’t be able to park. The sidewalk on the other hand, they would have a drop off from the main pour of the building, not a building up of a sidewalk. Also your car isn’t on the ground properly, if you notice a couple inches of wheel are sticking through the ground. On the big red curve, in the upper left you can see where the curve ends and it becomes straight. Also as suggested, some textures would look nice, since I've never seen concrete that color before. Its ok, but could have many things like trees people, better scaling and textures would make it top notch. Another thing you may want to keep in mind is having a shot from eye level to show the client how it will really look. Or go the other way and show the crane/helicopter shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ecastillor Posted November 12, 2005 Share Posted November 12, 2005 the overall look its kind of cartoonish...try using more real-world textures.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue_wire Posted November 12, 2005 Author Share Posted November 12, 2005 Dear all group members thanks for all replys specially for( Jeff Palmer )..... well , i am srill working to ensure my modeling technic ok , i am already notice this problem but the total working time was very littel about 20 hours ( Non stop ) i have to work very fast about the rendering it was v-ray ( i amreally sorry i know that its not the expected render from this wonderfull plugin . About texturing it s all a mater of the time & my pc configs (p4 2.4 , 512 mb) every shot rendered in about 2 hours ........... i will buy another one nearly wehen it is available ( Money ) anyway i have used only one directlight is it enough to get real light Iwill be happy if some body help me to readjust all the file to get real images i will send it nearly thanks for all & great respect to (Jeff Palmer ) & all who replayes best regards for all Mohamed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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