warehouse

[roland]

hi guys,

 

here is my latest job still on progressits a warehouse to be transform to a bar and restaurant. C&C are welcome.

 

thank you,

[DennisHolland]

Good start Roland,

 

check your multiplier, the light hit the wall way to hard. Your floor need uv's or another map (hint: scale your existing floormap to square tiles 50x50cm or 22") and the walls are too shiny. Wall-reflection is good but need a blur > bring down your glossy control. I like the overal speculars in the scene, atmosphere is nice.

 

Dennis

[Crazy Homeless Guy]

as for the design... it is a wharehouse. why tuck the bar into an L shape in the corner? i would leaving the ends open, possibly pulling it to the center of the end wall, and give it morwe prominence.

 

also, you are going to have a huge noise problem. you need some materials to absorb sound.