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The lighting might seem a bit too dramatic, the BLINDING spot on the left suggested it, it feels like it's a plasma furnace to the right :)...tone it down.

 

I agree, you need more furnitures, and people in the scene to break up the composition a bit more, right now it's sparse, the viewer will automatically exit the image from looking at the exit at the center left... so shift the view a bit more to the side from having such a focal point, or put ppl / plants etc, to distract such direct exit.

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