Lounge Area

[destijl_art]

hi guys this post is still on design process i just post it for some c&c thanks!!

[frank1331]

I think its a good start. A couple of things jump out at me. First the camera angle. Unless this lounge area is below where the camera is (which would require stairs or a ramp to get to) you need to pick a better view. If there are stairs, maybe show a part of them so people get the idea that you need to step down to get to this area.

 

The second thing is that all of furnature looks like its floating, it doesn't seem grounded. Furnatue in the background seems ok, its the ones in the foreground that look off.

 

The scene also looks overbright in my opinion. I would reduced the level of the lighting.

[Tim Saunders]

contrary to frank. i think the furnitre looks great you can clearly see some contact shadows from the legs on the ground. and the lighting in the scene is excellent. love the lighted columns. however it is the worst camera angle possible. it makes those hanging lights look like they are 2 feet off the ground. are they? lets give it an eye level camera and see where that puts it. and people. either use them or don't. in a space this huge, 2 people make it look like the company is on the verge of going out of business. put some people on the furniture and the many other areas of interest. nice scene for sure.

[destijl_art]

frank ang timothy thanks for that imformative comments i'll keep that in mind hope to finish this on time he he he any way the view of the was picked by my boss grrrrrrrr!!! i hate it too, actually i'm working on another camera angle, for the ceiling its relly low on actual its only 3 meters and maybe the camera angle makes it look under ground i'll post the new one as soon as finish rendering this.