BrianKitts Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 I've got one more day to tweak these guys before they go out for a magazine publication. Any comments, criticisms and suggestions are extremly welcomed! -THX! Specs modeled : Form_Z rendered : Max8 w/ Vray Adv. post : Photoshop CS2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddy Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 Really nice images. One criticism i'd have is the lack of entourage. Hospitals are busy places and some people and traffic might be good especially in the first image. Good work tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 I agree with Brendan, Excellent images especially the night ones, just love the lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 really good pics, but i feel those a little "empty", i think to add some details will get them better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianKitts Posted December 9, 2005 Author Share Posted December 9, 2005 really good pics, but i feel those a little "empty", i think to add some details will get them better can you be more specific? add detail to which parts? Can't modify the geometry or design, the construction documents are already completed...actaully the project is already under construction. I can still mess with the quality of the materials, lighting, and enterouge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris LeBlanc Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 Nice work. I would definitely add some people, but I would also try cropping them a little differently. Currently I feel there is too much foreground, especially the parking lot view. It is problematic primarily because the foreground does not add significantly to the communication of the design... it's just filling space in the rendering. Whenever I see that happening in my rendering I either crop tighter, or add pleasing compositional elements like landscaping. You may also consider an alternate vertical composition that focusses on the central element only. Regards, Chris Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bully712 Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 I think they are looking good. Try playing around with the colors, and contrasts. Hope you don't mind, but I took your two daylight images and did an auto color on them in photoshop. It livend up the colors a little and it gave the images more contrast. Also the 1st night scene is too dark at the drop off. Add some lights to brighten it up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joseph alexander Posted December 9, 2005 Share Posted December 9, 2005 Nice job modeling. Was this an in house work? -joe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianKitts Posted December 10, 2005 Author Share Posted December 10, 2005 Yes all done in house. We are a full architectural firm with departments for planning, interior design, landscape, visualization, and architecte teams. Our columbus office is somewhere around 180 people. Pretty large project expected completion i believe is 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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