GeraldH Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 ...tired of looking at this...we are in the "I'm not sure I like this color can you do 6 versions so we can take a look" stage of the process. I'm still fussing with cleaning up the landscape while they're making up their minds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Allen Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 How you've shown the topography of the land in front of the home works very well. For changes, I'd like to see more contrast, perhaps a more dramatic time of day that would add more contrast and color to the elevation of the home. Some variations in the shading on the grass would work well as it looks to be pretty much one shade of green now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 pretty nice composition of your trees. any reason you have to use an elevation view? is sure would come to life a lot more if you gave it a perspective view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShaunDon Posted December 12, 2005 Share Posted December 12, 2005 Alright, I've been biting my tongue all day on this, but I'm waiting for South Park cutouts of the Baldwin brothers to come jumping out of this house! Seriously, this style really makes me want to give 2D animation in max a whirl! Shaun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeraldH Posted December 12, 2005 Author Share Posted December 12, 2005 Allen, Yes...I'm on the search for a better grass map...I'll probably end up blending something together. Tim, Subdivision developer rules...this will be posted on the lot during construction. Actually the other renderings are watercolor/marker work...I'm breaking new ground...;-) Shaun, LOL! Thanks for the help guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuck Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 i know it's an elevation, but the roof looks like a vertical plane. i have no idea how you'd fix that without changing the camera angle. chuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apomales Posted December 13, 2005 Share Posted December 13, 2005 anybody in here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeraldH Posted December 14, 2005 Author Share Posted December 14, 2005 ...update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aaron2004 Posted December 15, 2005 Share Posted December 15, 2005 It's looking good...you need to lose those 2 trees in the front. They detract from the house...also, what software are you using to composite those flowers and trees in? If it's photoshop, then use the burn tool and shade in underneath the flower beds. They aren't casting any shadows on your ground Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aaron2004 Posted December 15, 2005 Share Posted December 15, 2005 It's looking good...you need to lose those 2 trees in the front. They detract from the house...also, what software are you using to composite those flowers and trees in? If it's photoshop, then use the burn tool and shade in underneath the flower beds. They aren't casting any shadows on your ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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