External Courtyard

[JamesTaylor]

Waiting to hear back from client in regards to this image.

 

Any C&C?

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=)

 

very good,

 

i liked the trees and vegetation =)

the trees is vray displac. ??

 

The sky it's very dark,

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I would increase the ilumination in the sun,

 

Excuse my english,

bye =)

[Tim Saunders]

looks nice. different angle, i wouldn't say bad though. sky is horrible though. looks super cg. find a nice one with some depth in the clouds. is there glass in the square cutouts on the wall we're leaning against? if so the falloff is way too strong.

[Aaron2004]

Yeah...I agree with the sky issue. If it's not, then it's pretty darn close to the default max/viz skies.

 

Also, how did you pull off the nice trailing/hanging effect for your vegation?

[JamesTaylor]

Thanks for all the comments, of which i agree with most!

 

i have to say i'm not too horrified by the sky, although i accept its a little dark here - the render is direct from viz no p'shop done as yet! but its easily changed in post so i can have a play when time allows.

 

The vegetation is vray displacement as suggested, the trailing plants are created by draping a mesh over the wall and appling an appropriate mat with dispalcement and oppacity channels.

 

It is glass in the wall were leaning against, again i agree that the falloff could be reduced a little!

 

The camera angle was stipulated by the client - its for a planning application and he wanted to hide some details which would appear set back on the roof (top right of image) hence the angle - it has actually grown on me as i've worked up the image!

[Jonathan Sanchez]

I realy like the modelling and materials. Your vegetation is incredible. Only thing I would work on is lighting. Maybe putting a sun system or increasing the exposure might help.