Mountain retreat - wip

[thevinylgibbon]

Hey everyone,

 

This is my first post here.

 

Personal project to learn software, everything modelled in Architectural Desktop 2006, rendered in Vizrender.

 

Any comments on how I can improve it?

 

Thanks

[mskin]

Looks like a very uncomfortable couch and i hope the contractor used adhesive anchors to secure the vases to the sill (they look a bit top heavy)... otherwise, i think its a nice effort. It looks like you're masonry is mapped oddly so that it becomes a soffit on the inside up near the aluminum window head.

[sunilarch]

good effort to learn,

few things to correct:-

1. perspective correction (cam and cam target has to be at same ht.)

2. over exposure where sunlight hits the sill

3. mapping and material on floor and ext. wall has to be revised

4. some kind of sun screen device to be added(horizontal blinds, vert. blinds, curtain etc

5.try changing the outdoor scene

6. the interior decor has to be revised(funiture, plants colour etc.)

 

if this is ure initial try on the software, u r a great learner!!! keep it up

[thevinylgibbon]

Thanks for the comments:

The sofa is my own design, just a concept really. I was playing about with the extrude command in ADT and that proved quite a challenging shape to make. Does look a bit awkward I suppose.

 

Top heavy vases...I hadn't noticed that would be a problem...

 

I will revise the materials, especially the exterior wall, and add a blind system aswell. I'd like to set this scene up so I can do interior night shots aswell.