ishpalsingh Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 this is done with max 7 vray photoshop c & c's are welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfienoakes Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 Nice modelling, good montage.. fits in well with the surroundings... until about the level of that fence.. What is that fence thing around the back? It sort of looks a bit like a force field.. And the road looks like it was put in afterwards in P'shop.. those, for me, are the two stand out items that bring the overall image down. Sort those out, and I think it will be a good montage..! Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted December 20, 2005 Author Share Posted December 20, 2005 thanks alfienoakes thanx very much for replying i can't understand which fence r u talking if its in the front its a boundary wall whose opacity i reduced to see the backside could u plz help me fix the road i am new to photoshop i will be gratefull thanx in advance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lhanh29 Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 I agree with you,Alfienoakes ! I think it is good working! Try to do better ! Ishpalsingh ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted December 20, 2005 Author Share Posted December 20, 2005 this is my attempt i hope it looks better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunilarch Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 imho remove the shurbs frm the side wall, add a darker road(try some references). The tree on the left sitracts a lot(u could rmove it. a perspective correction(in ps) will also make the image better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thevinylgibbon Posted December 20, 2005 Share Posted December 20, 2005 I like the angle this is taken from. I think the road could use a bit of bump map, and the kerbs need to be more defined. They look blurred compared to the clarity of the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted December 21, 2005 Author Share Posted December 21, 2005 sunilarch, i have sharpen the shrubs can't remove the shrubs and tree as the client wants it thanks all people for replying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 the road really needs modeled. it looks as though it is photoshopped into the image right now. also, ....when i was growing up, i used to watch this show called, 'The Great Space Coaster.' there was a French cartoon they played called 'La Linea' ..at least that is what i think it was called. anyway, your avatar reminds me of that cartoon. below is an animated gif of the cartoon. the person, i always thought it wa a witch, would just keep walking, and then encounter different things, like a hole in the path, and they had to fix the problem. although, in the cartton, i am pretty sure she was walking the other direction, like your avatar. ts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted December 21, 2005 Author Share Posted December 21, 2005 crazy homeless guy it is modelled could u helpme improve it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 crazy homeless guy it is modelled could u helpme improve it i think it is the soft/blurred edge, and no distinguishable texture that is making it look like a photoshop airbrush to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunilarch Posted December 21, 2005 Share Posted December 21, 2005 a quick touchup in ps(using reference) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted December 24, 2005 Author Share Posted December 24, 2005 thanx sunil arch i think u pasted the road on one side and mirrored it on the other side am i right? could u elaborate on how u did the edges and how u matched the roads with my image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunilarch Posted December 24, 2005 Share Posted December 24, 2005 i just looked for some road images(google) and picked one which is 70% matchng to ure image. then i adjusted the perspective correction and rotation etc. then i quickmaksed it with small but soft brush in ps and pasted on to your image.this is not a clean job cos i just want to show u the effect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ishpalsingh Posted December 26, 2005 Author Share Posted December 26, 2005 thanx sunil arch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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