manta Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 Hello, This one was just for fun, but any crits are welcome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skala67 Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 Turn on the lights....make it more dynamic...modeling and textures are good, just wanna see the more dramatic. good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted December 27, 2005 Author Share Posted December 27, 2005 Thanx, I've added some sunlight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joseph Petrino Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Big improvment. looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skala67 Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 yes, the lighting is much better. You start to get a sense of time and mood. One thing I noticed is that the towels are rigid and in reality the edge of the towel would actually not curl up at the end. Gravity would pull it down til it fell on the shelf. So you could either pull the edge down, or you could rotate the towels so that the edge is at the bottom of the roll. (hope this makes sense) Also allow a little human error. Even the most obesessive of us can not line up 4 towels exactly the same. (close yes, but make a little variance.) These critiques are not because the image is not good...it is rather good actually. cheers, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted December 28, 2005 Author Share Posted December 28, 2005 Thanx guys, and I completly agree about the towels, I'll post a new render when I've fixed a couple things... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaseck Posted January 3, 2006 Share Posted January 3, 2006 TJ is right. Towels shouldn't be identical. Also try to reduce the bump parameter on the shelf - it looks too much rugged. And maybe some extra light to light-up the shower? But It really like Your work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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