Apartment block visual

[pauldoherty]

Hi all;

Im finalising this visual today and would appreciate any

comments and indeed crits on it.

 

Thanks in advance

[Msamir]

I think its nice but the reflection on all the glass is wierd.

[pauldoherty]

I agree, I might play with it in photoshop.

Do you think the glass could be darker in

the whihe areas

[DAN212222]

yes it looks a bit bright as already said try playing with it in photoshop,

you may also want to post it in the wip or finished work section,

 

good luck

 

dan

[Iain Denby]

Paul

I don't think the original photo was good enough to use. Also, you manipulation of the steep road looka little odd too. The model lacks a bit of detail, such as flashings around the dorma windows and ridge tile on the roof.

[SunGlare]

I'm not sure if the color of the stonework is correct... it's too yellow. But it might be architects' decision, and then You're covered.

 

What is seem to be wrong with the uphill stret is the asphalt texture. I think You did that with the PSP. You can not ignore nature of particular texture, the asphalt for example is all about oil spots in the middle, and lighter bands toward the edges.

You know... just rotate it, to align the street. What You have is the pependicular to the direction.

 

Yeah.. the window refl is too intense. maybe some post proces corr.

 

Try to clean up the existing brick short wall. Because Yours look too clean and shiny, maybe incresing the bump?

 

Model looks time comsumig, so maybe add feww more hour and set up some radiosity.

 

Shadows doesnt match. Yours and photo.

[r_mc_gowan]

the shadows stand out alot, like there are two light sources in the image.

is this particular road in co.derry? im sure i know it!

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