interior

[NOOXY]

just a lil something i did in my spare time ....I'm still sorting out materials and stuff but how's my progress so far?

 

c&c most welcomed:)

[jophus14]

I like it. I would like to suggest two things though: Maybe add a bump map to the carpet or fix the tiling and the clock looks too far off of the wall or maybe that is just how the shadows look. I love your white wall texture. Did you create it or is it off of a texture pack?

[NOOXY]

thanks for the c&c

 

the clock is actually against the wall so i think the shadow makes it seem far..the floor texture is a high res texture but i'll add a more bump to it to see if it looks better....the wall is a default texture in cinema4d...

 

i'll post update soon

[NOOXY]

ok here's my finished work...what uall think?

[chuck]

your indirect lighting seems to be innacurate. is that vray? whatever program it is, try increasing the lighting quality. looks like the low/very low setting in vray free. try high if that's the case.

 

the materials on the chair looks odd, i'd replace it with chrome.

 

the TV looks like a painting. i'm not sure how you can fix that honestly. might just apply a black plastic material with some blur and assume it's off.

 

the arrangement of the room is odd as well. the TV is behind the chair?

 

chuck

[Jonathan Sanchez]

Nooxy this is looking good. Give tv screen reflection and chair chrome material and it should make it look even better. Another idea to study would be to provide some kind of sunlighting.

[ameo]

I like the point of view! TV realy looks flat, and carpet texture needs more tiling. Book on the table is to thick.

[Yaseck]

the TV looks like a painting. i'm not sure how you can fix that honestly.

 

First of all - use some real TV capture. Don't use ready mountains jpgs - it will always look fake. And as the sancheuz said - give to the tv screen some reflections.