Sirkus Posted January 14, 2006 Share Posted January 14, 2006 hello cg peeps, hope i can get comments and feedbacks with this recent project of mine. not my design though... hope u can give suggestions on the materials, landscaping, image composition and post-processing. modeled in cad. about 20 mins to render in max6 using vray. post processed in photoshop. thanks!!! hope to hear from u soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arquiteck09 Posted January 14, 2006 Share Posted January 14, 2006 I think the glow it´s too much and the sides trees of the main door looks strange, the rest is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sirkus Posted January 15, 2006 Author Share Posted January 15, 2006 hey arquiteck09, thanks for the reply. didn't realize how much the diffuse glow is... am having problems with my flatscreen monitor. can't really judge if its too bright....or dark... thanks for calling my attention on the side trees. didn't notice that. will send the finish product soon on. thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 Also try changing the BG image i dont think it fits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sirkus Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 Hi sir ravenwoods!!! could you elaborate more why the BG image doesn't fit??? is it the blur or the saturation of the pic???? its the pic from the site where it would be built. thanks for the comment. hope to hear from u soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Hi Sirkus Yes its too blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sirkus Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 hi sir ravenwood, was trying to achieve depth of field... hehehe. could you suggest a way of achieving a good depth of field??? tried to make it clear but it tried to capture the attention away from the house.... thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonathan Sanchez Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Sirkus you might also want to try to define your sunlight a little bit more. Its a clear day but your rendering looks like cloudy day. Also you might want to put some trees arond specially in background where ur grass meets the background image. The change is too noticeable. But its looking good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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