Msamir Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 Here's my first try any C&Cs are welcome. Thanks[Forgive the thread title i dont know how to change it i only managed to change this post title !] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IC Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 As with the prevuious one, it looks a bit like wax fruit but it's a good start. And by the way a 'bowel' is something completely different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 Yeah i agree about that i'll try to work more on the texturing, what about the lighting ? Saw what bowel means and fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ismael Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 The lighting looks very good to me and the blue fabric too. Looking forwards to see your progress with the fruit materials. Ismael Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeraldH Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 I really did not want to click on this thread... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 The surfaces look good, but what you need for this is SSS, sub-surface scattering, to get a more natural look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted January 17, 2006 Author Share Posted January 17, 2006 Here's an update although i think the apple and pear still look plastic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlytE Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 The plastic look may be less to do with what you have and more to do with what you dont have. I think you want to add lots more imperfections and defects to the surface of your fruit.... more black in those bananas... speckles in the apple, streaks in the grapes etc. I know your probably aware of this and just not at that stage, but it looks great so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Msamir Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 Well this is the final version i dont think i'll be working on it anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlytE Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 n1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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