Yet another plate of fruit

[AJLynn]

Help me get this one level higher. It's a C4D render. (I realize now that those aren't olives on the left)

 

[NOOXY]

Well it's a bit cartoony if that's what u're going for NPR i think the models are good but texture and lighting needs improving....good luck, nice work so far:D

[Msamir]

Hi Andrew, Try removing the light between the banana and the apple i think it has no use also try reducing the reflections on the plate and the black spots on the bananas look fake.

[Ismael]

I personally would not eat bananas with freckles. Here is a skin example:

http://www.boogaholler.com/weekly/texture/tmotw050800.html

 

And here are some reference photos. If you can skin some of them, then you can use as textures or color maps?:

 

http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.javajane.co.uk/food/plums.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.javajane.co.uk/food/&h=724&w=1262&sz=212&tbnid=JoGBQ5c9KloJ:&tbnh=86&tbnw=150&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dplums%26hl%3Den%26lr%3D&oi=imagesr&start=2

 

Best luck with the scene,

 

Ismael

[AJLynn]

I think I'd better redo the bananas - but they're supposed to be done without bitmaps, so this should be interesting