marco uccellini Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 This is my first serious radiosity piece of work. It is for a Stage D report for a school design. It is the finished piece of work, but obviously due to timescales it is not as worked up as I would have liked. It was rendered and modelled in Max and post work was done in Photoshop. I welcome any comments. Marco Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 *first glance of the image makes me confuse of the concept you are showing . ..is it about the ceiling? the floor? or the wall treatment. those blurred 2 persons are distracting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marco uccellini Posted January 28, 2006 Author Share Posted January 28, 2006 *first glance of the image makes me confuse of the concept you are showing . ..is it about the ceiling? the floor? or the wall treatment. those blurred 2 persons are distracting. trying to show the corridor space but in particular the ceiling/roof design with the long window sections to allow a brightly lit corridor. The people were added to break up the image a bit - but I see your point of view. I have posted the view again without the people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 *thats better, ill prefer without those people. *nway, the carpet is not cleary explicate, the texture is not vesible. try to add some bumps...dnt forget the baseboard, its functional. make some corrections of angle, the door is clearly slanted on the left. use the 'camera modifier'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkblue_wire Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 Hi well , i like the lighting & clear modeling inspite of being simple but for the image within people i think the people out of scale also you may need to try various colours for wall pantings special hot colours you may use two colours for the wall anyway i like the environment totaly > best regards Mohamed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 Yeah baseboard would help. It seems like there is a sharp transition from floot to wall. Some more color balance would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doodler Posted January 29, 2006 Share Posted January 29, 2006 lose the people..they are not helping the image, they look out of scale and see through.... thats what id do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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