office building

[cain]

Hi guys,

Looking for some imput before I present this to my boss.

[frank1331]

Looks pretty good, a few things I noticed:

 

I would tone down or blur the window reflections a little bit, there looks like there is something odd about the grass in the foreground just above the pond. Not sure if you intended it to be that way, just is a bit distracting.

 

Also, the blushish car in front of the building looks funny, not exactly why, it just does.

 

Other than that, great job.

[pipjor]

there are no shadows under the cars

[eoghan]

you might want to play with the levels a bit-if you look at the buildings behind their front is much brighter than their right side, so you might want to match that with your building, as your right side is slightly brighter than the front. and frank is right-the foreground looks a bit weird-the grass is far to tiled-you might want to try cloning some real grass onto it.

[NOOXY]

nice office building..wish i was working there:D

 

u need to do some work on the cars outside..the look NPR, i think it brings down the value of the building..otherwise nice work

[RAYMOND]

what are your trees...

 

nice work tho.... sure like the building.

[cain]

thanks for all the advice guys, you have been a big help.

Raymond, the trees are from got 3D.

[cain]

Here is the image after some quick editing in PS.

[The Trickster]

Overall its a nice arch rendering. )

 

I would personally add the camera correction mod just to straighten things up.

 

Very good tho!

[skala67]

I think the RPC cars are off scale compared to the cars on the left side of the picture in the background scene.