roham13 Posted February 20, 2006 Share Posted February 20, 2006 Hi guys.This is one of my rendering with vray.I will be so grateful to see your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christopher Nichols Posted February 21, 2006 Share Posted February 21, 2006 Moving to Critique area... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roham13 Posted February 21, 2006 Author Share Posted February 21, 2006 Hi Christopher.I am so pleased to see your name.Because I am also watching the gnomon vray tutorials.exterior and interior. They are great.But especially for the exterior dvd I think that it is so brief and they are still so many items to learn.Is there any hope that you exceed this great tutorial in any other dvd? and in the end ,I did not get the meaning of your reply "moving to critique area" please help me to understand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christopher Nichols Posted February 21, 2006 Share Posted February 21, 2006 You posted this thread in the Vray section... I moved it to the Critiques section. That is where people post work where they want feedback. Glad you enjoyed the DVD you purchased... I may be doing more training at some point later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaseck Posted February 21, 2006 Share Posted February 21, 2006 The builiding is Your design? Or is it some builiding You saw? I ask, because it's architecture is cery socialistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roham13 Posted February 21, 2006 Author Share Posted February 21, 2006 Hi yaseck.Yes i am also co-architect in this project.till now it is just a proposal.I will appreciate to hear your ideas about its architecture too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaseck Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 Shape of the building is very interesting, but I'm not really sure about its colours. This dirty blue and not really clean red makes me feel that the investor wasnt very rich. Try to play with the colours, or maybe only one colour? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 A little bit of context would go a long way in this project. This isnt meant in a bad way, but it kind of reminds me of piles of containers on a ship? I think the materials need a bit of definition. Tom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cain Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 the fence in the bottom right should be scaled down a little bit. At first glance it is hard to tell the actual size of the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roham13 Posted February 22, 2006 Author Share Posted February 22, 2006 Hi guys this is another alternative of the previous hospital.What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roham13 Posted February 22, 2006 Author Share Posted February 22, 2006 hi cain.yes you are right . It should be scaled down.It was just a concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cain Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 The night sceen looks awesome. Much like a disco. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derek Youssi Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 hmm.. those dots of color scattered everywhere makes me think that radiosity was used on a low sample setting. If this is going to be shown to potential investors I would make sure that issue is taken care of first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roham13 Posted February 24, 2006 Author Share Posted February 24, 2006 yes Derek you are right. I did not have enough time ot render. Also the client persist on exotic and strange rendering rather than real rendering. Another reason for yellow spots are override yelloe for raytrace . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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