pantel05 Posted February 20, 2006 Share Posted February 20, 2006 hi!!! this is a scene with lobby of lawyer office (i want divorce!!!!!!!! ) well the scene it`s a work in progress. i must put some details in room. Waiting for your comments and your ideas to decorate my scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted February 20, 2006 Share Posted February 20, 2006 i think you're on the right track but the one thing that bothers me is the camera angle..makes the room seem out of proportion...but keep us posted:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lambros Posted February 21, 2006 Share Posted February 21, 2006 nice colorful feeling, but it seems that the red chairs miss texture detail. A small bump for leather would be good enough. Materials look good, but apart from the camera angle comment, I would try to fit something more real as a window view. Kali sinexeia! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted February 21, 2006 Share Posted February 21, 2006 *here are some pointers..1. set the camera, use the modifier 2. the chairs are illuminated(nice color choice though) and rearrange 3. put some reflections on the floor 4. dnt forget the curtains 4. try to change the background 5. additional accs on the table top e.g. vase, books, etc. *welcome to cgarchitect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaseck Posted February 21, 2006 Share Posted February 21, 2006 If I were You i would add in the lights a little blueish color (very subtle). I think it will make the room more realistic. Now it's to warm because fo the chairs and the floor illumiation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pantel05 Posted February 21, 2006 Author Share Posted February 21, 2006 thanx guys for your posts i appreciate for sure !!!! i try to fixed some problems like camera window etc... thanx once again for yous posts when progress my scene i upload a new one render. hey!!! LABROS i`m happy to see a greek in this forum eyxaristo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pantel05 Posted February 21, 2006 Author Share Posted February 21, 2006 well here is my latest render, i fixed the camera lens, make texture like leather in chairs and finally put some acc.. and spot lights. i think looks better now but i know i have a litle more work to finish this scene. thank you!!! waiting for your comments i appreciate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mskin Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 I like the camera better. moving the chair made a ton of difference. not a fan of the light fixtures... they seam heavy and dark or something. i would change the background image too. it almost looks like another room on the other side of the window. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted February 22, 2006 Share Posted February 22, 2006 Dang! I actually liked the first camera angle, I liked the distortion too. Love the colors, chairs are still looking pretty beach ball plastic-like. spot lights look cool, but throw in some eis lights to really make them add to the scene. Yes the background (as I'm sure you plan to), and lastly, there really needs to be something amazing on that coffee table. Not sure what, but somehting different, like a TV remote control with theback lid off and batteries sitting next to the remote. Maybe even push it and have the battery package sitting there torn open too (if you dare:) ). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mskin Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 I like the second image because it is a better representation of how the room will feel. the first image is like that of a gnats perspective from the corner (perhaps some sort of honeycomb filter could work - or would that be a bumble bee? i don't know). I agree with the "beach ball" effect. I would have chosen white instead of black as hardware for the lights, and i question the use of ashtrays (and remote controls) as entourage in a lawyers lobby - . The magazine on top of the table looks cut off or something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 i question the use of ashtrays (and remote controls) as entourage in a lawyers lobby ... good point, for some reason i started thinking this was a living room. totally spaced the title of the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 Try to provide a visual path to the next room, possibly by moving the table to the right. Also, you should think about changing the large art that resembles the body part lawyers are known for violating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pantel05 Posted March 2, 2006 Author Share Posted March 2, 2006 hi again!! i don`t have a dead time at the last time to continue me scene. i found a litlle today and i fixed some problems. i start to model the next room (main office) and i hope to finished in 2or3 days IF i have deadtime in weekend, because we have carnival at this time (and my daughter say daddy daddy i want to go there) WELL here is the final render. *p.s. the background its gray (iknow) but this is the last thing who must fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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