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The deadline for this one was originally next Monday but I had to rush a draft for submission to the local newspaper yesterday so it's been a fun couple of days!

 

Due to that I'm having trouble even looking at it so any c&c would be most appreciated as I'm far from happy with it.

Lack of entourage and tiling textures I know about already and I'm trying a more 'head on' camera angle now.

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the middle part of the image is washed out, so it seems as if the bricks were shiny, not rough.

and your benches are floating.

did you use some skylight? the rendering looks a bit flat, you could add more skylight.

will you add some people too?

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Thanks guys.

That's what I needed to hear to get me back into this one.

 

I'll get working on the textures. Mainly the brick. Think I'm just about there with lighting etc.

 

The glass on the main tower is a 'frameless' system with 4x2m panes.

 

I'll post an update soon.

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That's a cool building

Love those old mills

Good to see that some of them are being renovated

The only crits I have, have been said

 

Kind of looks as though it has just rained. The bwk being shiny like that.

 

Geoff

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nice ic i like it...

 

it looks like it could be for urban splash.. they tend to redevelop a lot of these type of buildings... maybe could add some extra people activity... just to make it look a little more lived in i guess ???

 

anyhow good work .. dan

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Thanks Dan.

 

We're aiming at the same sector as Urban Splash ie trendy refurbishments and new builds but they have it down to a fine art. This is our first refurb south of the border but it's the first of many.

 

Here's some extracts from the hi res image......

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