dusk wip

[Tim Saunders]

I finally have a project I can post some wip. Normally I have to crank it out so fast, that I don't have time for c&c. This still has a lot to go, but I wanted to post it early so I can post some progress too. I will be adding some canopies over the domed storefront as well as setting some of them back a ways for some exterior resturaunt seating. I plan to change the background as well. There are a bunch of palm trees along both sides of the street. I just turned off that layer for this test render. See my latest gallary image for the day time shot at a different view if you want. I also plan to add some interior walls and lights. That will probably add some illumination in that courtyard opening in the middle. Lastly, I plan to crop out a bit of the foreground and add some vegitation there too, this is straight out of the frame buffer. I'd love to hear your thought and suggestions.

[Brian Cassil]

image?

 

Edit: Now I see it.

 

I'd give yourself more room on the top, bottom, and right sides. The whole thing feels kinda crammed right now.

[Tim Saunders]

Okay I had a minute to get back to this. I decided to go back to my first view. I thought it would be good to change things up by having a close up. but I couldn't really frame the image the way I wanted. I like this view a lot more. Any thoughts?

[Trevor Tizard]

View is much better........

 

Considering the size of the entrance area a little light spilling onto the footpath may help. Also if those are wall mounted lights on building they could help a touch.