orange room

[mao_mao]

Hello people... i need some help here.... i don't know what kind of image put as a background... the books are in white i don't know if i use a bitmap or only a color.... tell me what you think about the scene,the lighting... everything... fell free to coment... thanks for your attention

[3DwannaBE]

First of all, I love the color. Fabulous.

 

Second, the picture above the bed is great.

 

Third, the tracklighting is very realistic.

 

Fourth, Im not a big fan of the bed.. looks hard to lay on or plasticy.. if thats a word.

 

Fifth, its good modeling.

 

Sixth, think you could lead me somewhere to learn how to do carpet like that and did you make your vray light visible in the window thing?

 

Overall, it looks very nice.

[edub]

very nice overall... excellent lighting.

 

you have some illumination happening behind the books and desk - looks odd.

 

I think the highly reflective trackligthing is too distracting - why not have white lights, to blend more with ceiling? I know VRay reflectioons are so seductive, but in this case it really takes away from the rest of the image.

 

cushion on bed has some odd light streak - looks too sharp.. distracting.

 

large cabinet doors have some odd reflection? dunno what it is, but looks odd

[FOG Lite]

I think you should actually leave the books white unless you are going for a super-super photo real end result. After all, how often do you see matching color books in magazine layouts? I vote keep it as orange and white as you can.

 

To that end I might take the race car off the television. A little distracting and not as cool as the Lichtenstein above the bed.

 

I think the chromed track lights are fine, might take the track itself to white and that would be less distracting.

 

I don;t think you need a background either.

 

Looks amazing though, good work. Top drawer.

[mao_mao]

hello hello people... FOG Lite, edub and 3DwannaBE thank's for your comments... i made some changes in the room, i tried to make a conection between the 2 orange wall's with a waved line in the white wall,i also changed some materials and some colors tell me what you think about these changes... 3DwannaBE about the carpets i made them with vraydisplacement modifier, i learned how to work with it in a vray grass tutorial from evermotion,about the lighting i have 2 vray light(plane and invisible) in the window and 1 direct passign though the window...

edub about the stange rhings i don't know what cause them i changed the color of the books and that glow didn't disapeard and that stange thing in the pillow also happened in these new images i don't know how to change that... help please... FOG Lite ive changed the image but unfortunatly i didn't had time to make the new render sorry i'll post soon new images...

thank you all for your attention and please comment your comments are really important... thanks:D

[mao_mao]

hello hello people how are you??? i need some help here, i don't know how to loose that stange glow behind the desk... please i need some advice... and and your comments are a way to improve.... bye for now:p :D