corwin Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 This is a rough render (lots of grain), looking for crits on composition, lighting, mood, etc. The final will include people, buses, the works. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Saunders Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 I really like the camera angle. It's a nice space. Good job on the materials. There is some dead space, but loading the space up with the entourage you mentioned will improve the comp a lot. Maybe some sofer shadows. Keep posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ebad Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 Hey thats nice job! I really like it but it seems a little noisy.I think a sharp and more exact image would be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted March 22, 2006 Share Posted March 22, 2006 i think you're on the right track can't wait to see the finished image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted March 23, 2006 Share Posted March 23, 2006 I really like it...but...where are the busses? If you could find a model of one of those 1095's busses and have it pulling in on the left it would be perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted March 23, 2006 Share Posted March 23, 2006 I love it already... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
corwin Posted March 31, 2006 Author Share Posted March 31, 2006 Alright, after alot of crashing and other headaches this is finally (mostly) finished. Thanks to those who commented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted March 31, 2006 Share Posted March 31, 2006 WOW NICE NICE NICE..i love it man..the only distracting thing to me is the waman in that lime green pants.. ...great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted March 31, 2006 Share Posted March 31, 2006 love everything except the people, are you using 3d models as people ? what ever you're using its bringing down the reality of the rest of the pic, sorry you probably didn't want to hear that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
corwin Posted March 31, 2006 Author Share Posted March 31, 2006 yeah, the people are metroploy, at first I was thinking of using semi-transparent clip maps. However when I saw how nice the metropoly people looked in other renderings I felt I had to give them a shot. Also I needed people inside the bus so the metropoly became the most attractive option. Perhaps if I lower the GI on them and darken them up they will look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sardesign Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 I agree with the comments above... nice model!!! If the scene is about the scene (i.e. building and space), gray out and dissolve the people... way too distracting. The ductwork material is very cool... but just not something I would see for ductwork. Try adding some segment cuts to make it look like it's in sections. I would add some detail to the trusses too!!! Otherwise nice lighting and nice model. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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