bedroom

[NOOXY]

somthing i did today and looking for improvement..still a work in progress so all comments are welcomed;)

[cain]

Nooxy, looking very good. My only comment is the grain on the top trim of the door should run horizontal.

[NOOXY]

JUST FINISH this one here...an update on the first one...what ua ll guys think?

[Tim Saunders]

Much better. That Zebra looking rug was ruining it.

[edub]

why not straighten that view up? there's some slight vertical convergence happening. Also, I think you could frame the view a bit better - that bit of wall on the left, for example, is distracting. Either move camera to see more, or less of the wall - maybe more of a 2-point perspective tht a 1-point?

 

it is a bit clumsy how the two foreground objects frame the view - it's like the viewer is hiding up against the wall, or something - a bit strange. I'd like to see that red vase in its totality - looks nice.

 

That door sure is pushed against that wall, huh? Most doors would have a space between the frame and the wall, I would think.

 

 

Overall good lighting, although I think it would help if you had just a bit more dark in the shadows where things sit on the floor.

 

If there was a window on either one of the white wall, washing light into the space, it would be nice to see it.

[sardesign]

I love the lighting but I would agree... I have no idea where the light is coming from except it's coming from above. It looks like it is being lit with a sort of "skylight"... maybe I'm wrong. Add a window in the wall and try twisting the camera a little more to get more of a "dynamic" feel.