Hotel

[aflack]

Looking for some crits on how I can improve this image. The architevture of the main building can't change but the lighting and everything else can.

 

The deadline isn't for a while so I have some time if anybody has any suggestions.

 

Thanks

[JamesTaylor]

nice scene! the motion blur of the foreground car and the wet tarmac works really well

 

i think the sky is little bright / too blue for the lighting of the scene, there doesn't look to be anyone driving the cars waiting at the zebra crossing.

 

can the materials of the building be adjusted? its quite a boring grey at the min, how about some coloured up lights if its to stay that way?

 

what is the blue under the roof overhang on the main building? its a little confusing with the blue sky behind. the parapit roof of the background building (right) is missing a return.

 

camera correction, the background buildings look as if they are falling backwards and finally i'd add more people to give the image more life.

 

really good standard overall tho! how about a slight haze around the street lights too since its damp evening!

[aflack]

Thanks thats great, sometimes you look at an image so long you don't even see it anymore.

 

Didn't even notice the camera correction.

 

The image is being reviewed tomorrow so the rest of the building should be designed then.

[aflack]

I've corrected the camera distortion and made the main building and scene a bit lighter and more purple because as you said it was a bit grey. Also added some more street lights but I think these might clutter the scene a bit much.

 

Any opinions?

[ApeiNe]

Awesome work man !!

Just one trouble for me...

You got a big anysotropic refexion on your ground (the street), so I think a part cloudy sly would be better

[peggy]

I like the bottom part of this scene, feel really damp. For the sky, I feel the blue sky not belong to this scene, just feel awkward. I suggest you to see KuKu's image of Lang & Fang, how he/she chose the color of sky since yours has almost the same atmosphere as his/hers, just check out.

[manta]

I like it, but agree with the sky, its got to be after sunset, or its been raining all day, to have the lights on, I would suggest a very cloudy picture, or one with the clouds breaking up around sunset, I saw a few here :

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/news/newsfeed.asp?nid=3145

 

Like 029 or 030, and some sunset ones towards the end like page 7 or 8

[Lhanh29]

Good work!

i like architecture style, rendering,....

Keep it up. :)