eng_nart2002 Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 hey this is my second post, desgin, modeling, render took around 2 weeks, all the people the cars and the greenery where added in photoshop, what else do u think i should do to improve this image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 Why the Coca-Cola sign? That, and the Aston bring commercialism into a picture of a mosque. Is that appropriate? Especially the ad covering part of the tower. The car being blurred is a distraction, as well. Why not remove the cars and just have the building relate to people? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorID Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 hey salam, that seems like a nice design,well i guess another angle would show the mosque in a better way,color scheme. i see that yellow stone needs to be less satuarted,beside the side walk. after all nice image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DennisHolland Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 The images are well populated and 'alive'. Ernest is right, the car (probably the Imam's Maserati) is very distracting, too big and totally out of place. The Cola sign remind me of some mosques in the Netherlands. They usually are right next to the local sexshop (excusez moi) and coffeeshop (both Dutch famous)... Get those items straightened out and they are finished.... Regards, Dennis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eng_nart2002 Posted April 13, 2006 Author Share Posted April 13, 2006 hey all , thanks for ur comments, actually the mosque is apart of a mall, which i'm still working on the desgin, thats why i added the cola sign on the light, the yellow is 2 much i know but i like my images to be colourful, i just fill them with colours thanks agin for ur comments will work on that soon and repost them again... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chutti Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 Hey..nice work. 1 thing you can do to improve it by getting another sky. find a sky which matches with your lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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