Country Cottage

[NOOXY]

here's my latest project guys still a work in progress but how's my work so far..c&c away

[NOOXY]

ok guys here's my finished image...guess there's no critics on the first one.. ,,,,but c&c always welcomed

[bigroo]

Hi Nooxy,

The shadows seem quite bold for the cloudy sky and the background seems a touch out of focus with what could be the wrong sort of trees (Pine tree to the left?). Also there is a harsh line between it and the building.

Very well modelled though. PS I've like your past work

[raterry]

Overall nice work, Nooxy.

 

The background seems a bit off though, not sure if its color or it conflicts with the color saturation (wood) you have on the building plus that grey shape under the roof on the left is a little distracting. Not quite sure what it is. Where did you get tha palm in the foreground on left? Nice lattice work too.

-=Rob

 

PS getting ready for the Jazz festival?

[NOOXY]

changed the background and added a lil post effect in photoshop...i think i like this one better,,

[bigroo]

I think that there are a few conflicting shadow directions to iron out but much better visually.

[edub]

that background looks much better now.

 

The thing that stands out for me is the grass beneath the pool overhang - it just doesn't seem realistic that the grass would grow all the way to the inside edge like that. I'd much prefer a border of gravel, or dirt or something as a buffer.

[RODRI]

nooxy: the last shot with the background is better than first one. i agree with other guys (about grass) but the wood is not very realistic(but depends on you if the render way is realistic)

[NOOXY]

well i took some of the adive posted plus the architect made some minor modifications but here's the end results....