first post,C&C welcome

[mikegeng]

do this for my a client, just feel the wall too white, how to express a wall in white color in sunshine light?maybe right down part got too much red color,and the curb got too much too, i think

[bigroo]

do this for my a client, just feel the wall too white, how to express a wall in white color in sunshine light?maybe right down part got too much red color,and the curb got too much too, i think

 

The building looks very English, your mapping is out on the bricks on the lower section (you can see a half brick course) and you need a larger map on the white wall too. The grass is bleeding into your path and the car is too expensive for the maisonette.

 

I do like the modelling though (especially the drainpipes!). I'm sure if you add some foliage etc it will only add to it's value.

 

Well done for your first post.

[mahorela]

I agree with the previous post about the foliage etc. Some shadowing from trees falling onto the building etc would break up that light nicely. I think the car is too reflective.

 

you've done great things so far with what is essentially a brick box.

[mikegeng]

thanks very much,this house is really from England ,the rainpipe provided by my client,so I used them everytime:) the house maybe around $100000, and I have no concept of the price of a car, since I have no plan buying one to myself, but now I have some interest on it, "what type housemeans what type cars", that is very reasonable,they told me they like more golf grassland, neat and tidy,so other folige can be added in photoshop if they want, the grass is out of the curb, I have a good luck, correcting it before send out to the client! so must be enough careful,

good idea on the mapping, white wall and brickwall, I will notice this in followig days,

thanks much

[mikegeng]

added some trees:)

[alikashan]

really nice image and lighting is superb but y dont you improve the mapping of textures along with bump specially the paving and road etc. and your car is too reflective.

regards:cool:

[mikegeng]

thanks, just have put attention to the background, will pull on with other units