wizuby Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 I have been trying to get into the gallery for awhile now on this project, but i can't. Any suggestions. I can see that my sidewalk material is not that good, and mapped poorly. Other then that i dont know. Any other suggestions? I am bad at critiquing my own drawings. Please help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mahorela Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 any special reason it's black and white? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logitek Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Hello Adam, yeah, I feel the black and white is a little cold... I also think there's too much sky. I've done a very very quick coloring test on your image... I think you'll have something amasing once you color it nice and solfty because I can't find anything bad about your image appart from these 2 things (sky and B&W). great work! Matt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
odi120522 Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Sir Matthieu can i ask something...how did you color the view/scene? i mean did u use photoshop? or other software? tnx... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logitek Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Sir Matthieu can i ask something...how did you color the view/scene? i mean did u use photoshop? or other software? tnx... Yes, photoshop starting with a hue/saturation-colorize, then I painted over the image on a color layer... but like I said, this was a test that took me about 2 minutes, and I posted the image to illustrate what I was saying (an image is worth a thousand words). cheers Matt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 i think your modelling and rendering look good..but like logitek says i think it will make an even better image if it was colored..imo work on that then resubmit...great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slinley Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 I think the modelling of your buildings is good but the planting in the foreground is confusing me, It looks like you have some shoots planted into the pavement but nothing in the front garden. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wizuby Posted May 4, 2006 Author Share Posted May 4, 2006 yeah...i noticed that the plants look like they are growing out of the sidewalk. There is actually a dirt material there but you cant tell. I will work on getting a nice color image of this particular view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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