apartment-building

[anindia]

G+IV storey apartment building. Usual practise here, is to provide rcc projection in lintel and floor slab lev. and make the final massing by using different colors. any suggestions?

last night i ve tried to upload the image, but mystriously it was not uploadaed when i see my thread.

[IC]

I really like the colours.

 

In fact its a pleasing enough image apart from the people and the car. Do they need to be in there?

[anindia]

thanks collins for ur comment. i remove the car. that was really disproportionate. but i didn't find anything wrong with the human figure. so, i didn't remove them.i ve also done some colour corrections. pls cc

[edub]

the kids on roller skates are too small!

[mahorela]

the problem with the people is that they are out of scale. It seems like you are trying to show that some of these people are different distances away from the camera but it doesn't come across that way. The girls with the backpacks are way too big and the rollerskate kids are tiny and they both appear to be similiar distances away from the camera.

 

are the windows in the building tinted purple? Seems to be an odd colour to reflect given that the sky is blue.

[antonio_frias]

I think there is a problem with the scale (people, building and landscape), but what really bothers me are your colours, I think they are just too bright