mahorela Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 hi all, been staring at this far too long, think it's close to finished but wanted some feedback. All comments welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Clementson Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 Looks great - the one thing that jumps out is the non-vertical room corner, if you can put an architectural camera on that to straighten it out. The only other thing that bugs me is the lighting on the stone tiles in the bottom left - something not quite right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antonio_frias Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 I like the overall look, don't change a thing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 what also bothers me is the overall whiteness and cleaness and brightness of all the white things in there. it jumps out a mile to me. otherwise, nice going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesTaylor Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 i concerned that everything is going to slide out of the bottom right of the image! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
notamondayfan Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 id say the rooms too bring, considering the blinds over the window, and no lights appear to be on inside the room. otherwise its great work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mahorela Posted May 11, 2006 Author Share Posted May 11, 2006 wow thanks for the quick response. Heres an update. Seems I got a little too cute with the camera angle and a little too eager with the bump mapping and speculars on the tiles. Great comments. Thanks Steve for such a great comment about the whites, never thought about it that way. Messed around with some falloff maps instead of straight diffuse whites, I think it really makes a difference. Am really trying to improve my work so any more comments or general advice would be much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Clementson Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Much better 3 thumbs up to that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeilveen Posted May 13, 2006 Share Posted May 13, 2006 Wow, looking very nice here! Second image has it all if you ask me! Cheers Ronald Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTI Posted May 14, 2006 Share Posted May 14, 2006 Good work ...........Bravoo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gods418 Posted May 14, 2006 Share Posted May 14, 2006 this is damn perfect .... can i make a request? can you turn on the lamp shade on the side table ......... .for a more than perfect scene...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Smith Posted May 14, 2006 Share Posted May 14, 2006 Is it me, or does it look like the ceiling on the right (just above the window) has a hotspot on it. I'm wondering where this is coming from. It seems that the only light source is outside the room in which case, there shouldn't be so much light there on the ceiling. But fantastic nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parker1 Posted May 14, 2006 Share Posted May 14, 2006 I think the "BUMP" on the floor tile is a little to high. Reduce it by about 30% and you have sold me. GREAT JOB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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