office building c&c welcome

[justintime1]

Hi folks,

 

This is my most recent render of a office building my practice has designed. I render using c4d and a bit of post in Photoshop. any comments or suggestions are very welcome.

 

Matt

[JamesTaylor]

generally i think its ok, the biggest improvement to the image would be to work on the image composition. Its difficult to see view in my opion as its so squashed into the frame. i'd try moving the the camera back from the building and adjusting its angle to create a stronger perspective.

[Jason Matthews]

Definitley pull back so we can see the building with context. The stone wall seems too flat. Add a displacment to it (if using vray).

[mtb0506]

agreed. i would also like to see a little more of the roof over the outside ramp. you took the time to model it, why not show it off. again, major issue is the camera angle.