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I like the look overall.

 

But straighten up the entry image! You lose the impact of verticality by the slight three-point. And make sure there's a little extra contrast at the actual entry.

 

The layout is a problem. The building crown is obviously 'the point' (no pun). But you show three views that make an articulated top shape--only one of them should dominate, and that would obviously be the one showing the actual top. It should be shown higher than everything else, and as big as the entry one. The whole tower shot could be much smaller, all that detail is just distracting.

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I like the look overall.

But straighten up the entry image! You lose the impact of verticality by the slight three-point. And make sure there's a little extra contrast at the actual entry.

The layout is a problem. The building crown is obviously 'the point' (no pun). But you show three views that make an articulated top shape--only one of them should dominate, and that would obviously be the one showing the actual top. It should be shown higher than everything else, and as big as the entry one. The whole tower shot could be much smaller, all that detail is just distracting.

 

 

These were a portion of a series of images in working on an ad layout - this is not the ad layout. I was showing the client several views.

 

Here is one of the several adds that he went with. Various layouts and views for different publications and configurations.

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