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[Jeffrey]

Hello Everybody,

 

This is a design for my friend.. c&c are welcome.. Have a nice day.

[cain]

Nice start. My only comment is that the image on the t.v. is too bright for that time of day. Try leaving a black screen with a bit of reflection.

[minesman]

For a newbie in the 3d viz it looks very good. What software did you use to model and render the scene.

[NOOXY]

NOT A Bad start..i especially like the first 2. You seem to have the natural light down already...i agree with the tv image, too bright. It's especially important to observe actual life images so your renderings can become realistic as possible and i learnt that in here...

[Jeffrey]

Nice start. My only comment is that the image on the t.v. is too bright for that time of day. Try leaving a black screen with a bit of reflection.

 

Thanks, Cain and Nooxy, I'll change the tv and post again. I use HDRI to create this atmosphere, wonder am I on the right track? Again, thanks for the helpful comments:D

[Jeffrey]

For a newbie in the 3d viz it looks very good. What software did you use to model and render the scene.

 

Yeah, I'm quite new to 3dsmax. Before that I used Archicad to model and artlantis to render but both software has it's own limitation. For me, archicad hard model organic object while artlantis 4.5 is hard to achieve photorealistic image. Maybe they're doing better now(Artlantis R). Back to your question. I use 3dsmax and vray~!.. I imported some of the objects.

[sardesign]

add some dirt to the scene... looks too clean

 

would you like any c+c on the design? i won't bother unless you request it because this is a cg forum

 

btw, very nice start.

[Jeffrey]

add some dirt to the scene... looks too clean

 

would you like any c+c on the design? i won't bother unless you request it because this is a cg forum

 

btw, very nice start.

 

plzzzzz.. some comments on the design would be great~! btw, how to add dirt to the scene? I also feeling there is something missing in the scene. any clue?