lschindler Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 Please give some crit...as I would like to finish er up tomorrow. Thanks in advance! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blade911 Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 keep goin mate.. landscpae, environment n more lighting tweaks n ur ready to go i guess. cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gods418 Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 if no time to render put landscapes or any effects using photoshop or photopaint or any image editing tools but not the microsoft paint its very lousy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IC Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 Just looks slightly bland at the moment but I assume that's what you're working on. It needs more detail-cills, gutters, etc and some more work on the materials. Are the stone modules really that large? A more central viewpoint would make it more interesting too. Post your updates, it looks promising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mahorela Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 this is nicely modelled which make it such a shame to leave it at this stage, in my opinion this is where the fun starts. would take you two minutes to add a few trees and get a decent gravel texture for the driveway, would make the world of difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 looks fine so far. you know what you have to do. make it look like i'd like to work there! keep us updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lschindler Posted June 28, 2006 Author Share Posted June 28, 2006 Here tis with some more work...struggling w/plants as usual. LS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marcoboy Posted June 28, 2006 Share Posted June 28, 2006 Looks good I was thinking that it liiks a bit flat (no contrast on the building itself), and then I realised: Maby it's because of the gray windows? Is there anything you could do to those? Kind Regards, Palikka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted June 28, 2006 Share Posted June 28, 2006 your modelling looks good but need some work on the lighting.. 1. lighting is a bit too flat, needs some contrast and doesn't match the plants and tress around the house. 2. i would leave out the people for now and concentrate on your composition..i personally don't use people in my scenes until the lighting and composition is close to the fiished image... 3. background doesn't match your cam angle.. keep us posted an good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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